Some of it is really sloppy. I was falling asleep a little teeny tiny bit.
My second list was a lot more descriptive and intuitive. I wrote more about my emotional responses to the sounds. Instead of "footsteps" I focused on where those footsteps were in relation to me. Another example is the cicadas which I find absolutely aggravating. I also discussed a change in sound as opposed to the sound itself, which makes sense since without sight, I have no way to gauge what's happening or where unless I listen to the cadence of the sound being made.
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