Critique Response

I really enjoyed critique. Everyone's work is starting to grow. I also enjoyed how each person took a different route with this project. Overall I think my feedback was accurate. I wish I could have stuck with my original plan for my work but I still used what I had to go with my split screen and overlapping sounds. I may take the advise and show all the sounds overlapping in the beginning of the video. I'm still not sure because I'm going to go a different route when I redo my video so depending on exactly what I do will decide what effects I will use. I'm leaning toward using sounds that we all hear everyday but they flow differently when overlapped. I don't think I will attempt to record my family again, instead I will record my friends. With changing things so that it is not so personal it will help me be able to record my friends and some of the "college kid" sounds we make. It will also help the viewer be able to relate more to the sounds they hear.