Critique for Project 1

After project 1's crit I realized the parts that were working and lacking in my project. The use if repitition was a point many of my peers brought up. I agree that my method of drawing attention to the doorknob and cell phone could have been done a little differently. I was told that the sound effects added volumes to my project, which I agree with completely. As a whole I wish that the videos were shown before the artist gave their explanation so that we could have our own preconceived notions that could be confirmed or further explained.