Critique Response

I believe my feedback during the critique was accurate. If I could go back to change anything it would be the order of the photos in the video. I would move over some of the photos to match the slideshow more. At the time that I was making the video I was more concerned with the order of the photos than making sure they matched the narrative completely. Overall I was very happy with the outcome of my video. I probably would not include the perspective of tourist in the video because of the time limit and also it takes away the personal feel of the video. If I did want to continue this project I would want a second video dedicated only to the tourist perspective rather than including them in this video. I felt like my narrative and nature sounds were very effective and helped the viewer fully understand the video and the personal aspect it had. I’m also very glad I included my own photos that I edited I think it made the video more cohesive and an overall nice quality. The feedback from everyone was great and I think the first class critique went well.